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SilverOtterSage
Posts : 309 Join date : 2011-09-17
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Tue Dec 06, 2011 6:41 pm | |
| That was fairly good about nature is why, is what Yoda would say (terrible rhythm there...., and I don't even understand rhythm in poetry!!!!!, I'm almost 100% sure that some LA teacher made it up just so there would be something else to teach..... *sigh*)
Red, Orange, Yellow Leaves fall, an endless cycle until Winter comes | |
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chichi
Posts : 379 Join date : 2011-08-21 Age : 26 Location : Life and Death and All Between
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Tue Dec 06, 2011 8:29 pm | |
| Uh, a leaf only Can only fall once, my dear. You need to get your words straight Bold, twinkling stars shine, As lemonade glass clink. Alluring summer nights. | |
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Stonewing130
Posts : 553 Join date : 2011-08-21 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere over the rainbow ...
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:10 pm | |
| Glorious sunrise. Scarlet and magenta rays. Banishing the dark.
Noon. Twelve o'clock sharp. Sun blazes down from above. Sweltering summers.
Cool breezes run wild. Caressing cheeks, tickling arms. Front porch afternoons.
Precariously. The light and the dark balance. Magically blending.
Night falls upon earth. Sun dies, moon lies, stars shine cold. Out come the monsters.
Amidst pitch black skies. The witching hour is nigh. Beware! Wait for dawn. | |
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chichi
Posts : 379 Join date : 2011-08-21 Age : 26 Location : Life and Death and All Between
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:16 pm | |
| Eep! I love it! That Was actually a really Good haiku. Congrats.
Last edited by chichi on Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:24 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Stonewing130
Posts : 553 Join date : 2011-08-21 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere over the rainbow ...
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:20 pm | |
| Hehehe. Thank you. XD What do you mean by: "really haiku"? I'm confused. | |
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chichi
Posts : 379 Join date : 2011-08-21 Age : 26 Location : Life and Death and All Between
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:24 pm | |
| I fixed my error. Sorry about that blunder. Uh... whoopsy daisies? XD | |
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SilverOtterSage
Posts : 309 Join date : 2011-09-17
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:22 pm | |
| Uh... whoopsy daisies does not suffice for what thou haft done to him now (OLDE ENGLISH!!!!!)
One day, fifty days Time is a consistent blur faster, slower, gone | |
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LazyLongboard
Posts : 96 Join date : 2011-09-17 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Thu Dec 15, 2011 8:09 pm | |
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SilverOtterSage
Posts : 309 Join date : 2011-09-17
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:13 pm | |
| ???
What art thou saying? Confusing be that haiku What to make of it? | |
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