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SilverOtterSage

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 06, 2011 6:41 pm

That was fairly good
about nature is why, is
what Yoda would say
(terrible rhythm there...., and I don't even understand rhythm in poetry!!!!!, I'm almost 100% sure that some LA teacher made it up just so there would be something else to teach..... *sigh*)

Red, Orange, Yellow
Leaves fall, an endless cycle
until Winter comes
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 06, 2011 8:29 pm

Uh, a leaf only
Can only fall once, my dear. You need
to get your words straight Smile

Bold, twinkling stars shine,
As lemonade glass clink.
Alluring summer nights.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 06, 2011 9:10 pm

Glorious sunrise.
Scarlet and magenta rays.
Banishing the dark.

Noon. Twelve o'clock sharp.
Sun blazes down from above.
Sweltering summers.

Cool breezes run wild.
Caressing cheeks, tickling arms.
Front porch afternoons.

Precariously.
The light and the dark balance.
Magically blending.

Night falls upon earth.
Sun dies, moon lies, stars shine cold.
Out come the monsters.

Amidst pitch black skies.
The witching hour is nigh.
Beware! Wait for dawn.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 06, 2011 9:16 pm

Eep! I love it! That
Was actually a really
Good haiku. Congrats. Very Happy


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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 06, 2011 9:20 pm

Hehehe. Thank you. XD
What do you mean by: "really
haiku"? I'm confused.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 06, 2011 9:24 pm

I fixed my error.
Sorry about that blunder.
Uh... whoopsy daisies? XD
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 07, 2011 5:22 pm

Uh... whoopsy daisies
does not suffice for what thou
haft done to him now
(OLDE ENGLISH!!!!!)

One day, fifty days
Time is a consistent blur
faster, slower, gone
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 15, 2011 8:09 pm

Nazi sex orgy.
Double snouted cyclops pig.
Not google lawsuit.

An accidental
Haiku I wrote while talking
with the equine one.

(Link to PDS: CRAZY NAZI 0RGY RESULTS IN GOOGLE LAWSUIT?! )
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry Thread: Haikus   Poetry Thread: Haikus - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 24, 2011 12:13 pm

???

What art thou saying?
Confusing be that haiku
What to make of it?
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